I wish I could get that slime.

By Anonymous -
"Mom please can I have slime?" "No you can't,the slime will mess everywhere says mom." "My favorite color is the blue one and it doesn't smell". "Fine you can have it!" So they went to the shops and bought slime. He took it out and the slime dripped through his hands on to the floor. Mom says " you can't get the slime any more!" So they went home and he tried to make slime. He could not make slime because he did not know what to do. Then his mom finally got him blue,non smelling slime.

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  1. Mrs S10 May 2017 at 11:37

    Well done, Mitchell! You followed the brief well and submitted a lovely piece of writing. I look forward to reading more in the next few weeks. Well done also, on being the first one to submit for this challenge!

    Just a tip - remember to make sure you use speech marks before and after someone's speech and to begin all direct speech with a capital letters. A really good first effort!

    Do ask Mom and/or Dad to post a here comment too!

    Thank you,

    Mrs S.

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    1. Mrs S10 May 2017 at 14:36

      Oops! * a capital letter, not letters.

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